Order Description
would like you to revise my paper that I already wrote. The professor provided me with comments/ page and please fix the paper accordingly.

Page1: the last paragraph second sentence write from where is the study instead if just ” The study.”

Page 2: in the first paragraph, first sentence the professor wants you to say from where is the evaluation. He wants you to write the source. Also in the first paragraph, third sentence instead if writing ” the best movie” write ” The best movie by box office. ” Also, in the second paragraph in the last four lines the professor wants you to say it more simply.

Page 4: in the first sentence remove the word ” literal.” Alsoin the first paragraph line 7, the sentence the starts with ” Authors such as asgede”, the professor wants you to rephrase it. In the second paragraph line 5 the sentence that ends with the word ” the nationals” the professor wants you to say what nationals or which nationals? At the end of page 4 the professor wants you to write about the money side of hollywood- who decides what movies get made/ distributed?

Page 5:

The professor wants you to write the source of the last pragraph.

Page 6: in the second line and the end of the line please change the word “by” to “but.”
In the 4th line the professor wants you to say what remarks? Also in the same line explain more about the black functionalism.

Page 8: in the first line explain why smdoea the research will be based on an analysis of three hollywood movies on africa. Under case1: blood diamond in line 3, at the the sentence ” the movie depicts” the professor wants you to write which african country was meant there. In line 4 sentence starts with ” th wars between africans” the prof saor wants you to say which africans/ what country.

Page 9: The first paragraph under case to the professor wants you to write the reference. The second under case to the last sentence after the word Africa include ‘by playing on stereotypes of destruction and moral collapse’

Solutions to add to this paper made by African directors -> issues of distibution.
Combat by making films available.
Write about ” Nollywood.”
See the Adichie Ted Talk and talk about it in the paper.

Order Description
would like you to revise my paper that I already wrote. The professor provided me with comments/ page and please fix the paper accordingly.

Page1: the last paragraph second sentence write from where is the study instead if just ” The study.”

Page 2: in the first paragraph, first sentence the professor wants you to say from where is the evaluation. He wants you to write the source. Also in the first paragraph, third sentence instead if writing ” the best movie” write ” The best movie by box office. ” Also, in the second paragraph in the last four lines the professor wants you to say it more simply.

Page 4: in the first sentence remove the word ” literal.” Alsoin the first paragraph line 7, the sentence the starts with ” Authors such as asgede”, the professor wants you to rephrase it. In the second paragraph line 5 the sentence that ends with the word ” the nationals” the professor wants you to say what nationals or which nationals? At the end of page 4 the professor wants you to write about the money side of hollywood- who decides what movies get made/ distributed?

Page 5:

The professor wants you to write the source of the last pragraph.

Page 6: in the second line and the end of the line please change the word “by” to “but.”
In the 4th line the professor wants you to say what remarks? Also in the same line explain more about the black functionalism.

Page 8: in the first line explain why smdoea the research will be based on an analysis of three hollywood movies on africa. Under case1: blood diamond in line 3, at the the sentence ” the movie depicts” the professor wants you to write which african country was meant there. In line 4 sentence starts with ” th wars between africans” the prof saor wants you to say which africans/ what country.

Page 9: The first paragraph under case to the professor wants you to write the reference. The second under case to the last sentence after the word Africa include ‘by playing on stereotypes of destruction and moral collapse’

Solutions to add to this paper made by African directors -> issues of distibution.
Combat by making films available.
Write about ” Nollywood.”
See the Adichie Ted Talk and talk about it in the paper.